In the feedback left in my Turnitin, there were several useful suggestions. In the initial paragraph, there where some capitalization errors as well as the use of underlining the titles of the books rather than italicization. In the next paragraphs, there were a couple of sentences that would have been better if I had used a colon or divided the sentence in two. In the conclusion, there were some new ideas that drifted away from what I had discussed earlier and it would have been more interesting to continue with the original train of thought and not diverge into a generic conclusion. I appreciate these suggestions and I will take them into account for other papers and in the exam.
Reading over my paper again, I completely agree with Mr. Tangen suggestions and I will be especially careful to apply what he talked about in the future. I will especially try to proof read my paper several times to avoid long sentences and capitalization errors of this sort.
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